I still can’t figure out what’s wrong with the opening line of my Best/Worst Pitch Contest submission. I’m not asking you to offer advice on it, but the whole query aspect of writing is overwhelming me. Instead of sending manuscripts out like my other writer friends, I just sit here like a dunce collecting them. What is my problem? One silly letter and you’d think I was attempting to write the equation for Einstein’s theory of relativity.A. You are definitely over-thinking this. Nobody writes at their best when they're stressed out.
And right now I’m stressing out over whether or not the commas in my post reply were correctly placed.
B. What was the first line of your pitch? I separate them from names, so I have no record of which was yours.