tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post6564816278879171540..comments2024-03-28T05:28:28.567-04:00Comments on Editorial Anonymous: Query 10: Thar She BlowsEditorial Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06294247222893767117noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-88569318980589728472015-08-29T02:42:45.277-04:002015-08-29T02:42:45.277-04:00I say many thanks to the father of the website adm...I say many thanks to the father of the website admin I read this, because at this website I know a lot of information information that I did not know before his<br /><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/RSKsJG" rel="nofollow">Hubungan TBC Dan HIV</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/mlMGN6" rel="nofollow">Cara Mencegah Penyakit Wasir Dan Obat Alaminya</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/wVsaa3" rel="nofollow">Obat Laringitis Ampuh</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/PHw8k5" rel="nofollow">Obat Gastroenteritis Tradisional</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/dYIxOc" rel="nofollow">Obat Herbal Hidronefrosis</a> Evafhadilah28@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05459615572288662934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-60134466357925381932007-09-22T20:43:00.000-04:002007-09-22T20:43:00.000-04:00I'm reminded of Miss Snark's constant remark durin...I'm reminded of Miss Snark's constant remark during last December's crap-o-meter: <I>This isn't a hook, it's a first page.</I>Sarah Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02153201454830937349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-32006511388026135042007-09-22T18:38:00.000-04:002007-09-22T18:38:00.000-04:00As a pb writer/illustrator I found your voice too ...As a pb writer/illustrator I found your voice too mature for that of a young child. As matter of fact, my first impression was that your speaker was upper mid-grade or even youngest YA. When I got to the end of your query I was surprised. Perhaps you could investigate the halls of midgradery as you pursue this.<BR/><BR/>I have found thru many conference critiques of other writers, that everyone wants to(and thinks they can)write pb, but much of what I see(saw)is mid-grade voice in that expected pb format. <BR/><BR/>And SO many editors say they are looking for it mid-grade right now.<BR/><BR/>You really have to get the voice right in whatever book you write. SMILEAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-60610722434078986612007-09-22T16:10:00.000-04:002007-09-22T16:10:00.000-04:00Can we see some more examples of picture book quer...Can we see some more examples of picture book queries?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-54864990565144246862007-09-22T14:58:00.000-04:002007-09-22T14:58:00.000-04:00"lightening"?"<I>lightening</I>"?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-12028220394049078002007-09-22T13:24:00.000-04:002007-09-22T13:24:00.000-04:00If this is Zach's story (he seems to be the one wi...If this is Zach's story (he seems to be the one with the problem that needs to be solved), should it be told in the older child's POV? I'd be interested in others' opinions. Can't decide whether it would be interesting or confusing.LindaBudzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09290094983584931044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-73012698035314568572007-09-22T12:56:00.000-04:002007-09-22T12:56:00.000-04:00If this is a 950 word picture book then you really...If this is a 950 word picture book then you really need to make it simpler and give it a real plot.<BR/><BR/>Somebody "annoying" their big sister is a believable character trait, certainly, but what is the plot?<BR/><BR/>It isn't clear.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com