tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post5898220653954060073..comments2024-03-28T05:28:28.567-04:00Comments on Editorial Anonymous: Query 12: Tune In Next Time for "All's Fairy in Love and War," or "You Can Pick Your Friends, But You Can't Pixie Your Family"Editorial Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06294247222893767117noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-69453425920167502162023-02-27T06:32:36.501-05:002023-02-27T06:32:36.501-05:00pgslot มาแรง ไม่แพ้ ลิเวอร์พูล เพราะเว็บของเรานั้น...pgslot มาแรง ไม่แพ้ ลิเวอร์พูล เพราะเว็บของเรานั้นก็กำลัง ขับเคลื่อนเปรียบเสมือนเครื่องจักรที่กำลังมาแรงที่สุดเพราะเว็บ pg-slot.game ของเรานั้นกำลังนำเสนอเกมให้ทุกท่านที่เข้ามาได้รู้จักpgslot มาแรง ไม่แพ้ ลิเวอร์พูลhttps://pg-slot.game/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-34655989596580464712015-08-29T02:40:52.461-04:002015-08-29T02:40:52.461-04:00I say many thanks to the father of the website adm...I say many thanks to the father of the website admin I read this, because at this website I know a lot of information information that I did not know before his<br /><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/RSKsJG" rel="nofollow">Hubungan TBC Dan HIV</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/mlMGN6" rel="nofollow">Cara Mencegah Penyakit Wasir Dan Obat Alaminya</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/wVsaa3" rel="nofollow">Obat Laringitis Ampuh</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/PHw8k5" rel="nofollow">Obat Gastroenteritis Tradisional</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/dYIxOc" rel="nofollow">Obat Herbal Hidronefrosis</a> Evafhadilah28@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05459615572288662934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-3793163675466905912015-04-25T08:55:58.300-04:002015-04-25T08:55:58.300-04:00I feel that is among the so much significant info ...I feel that is among the so much significant info for me. And i am happy studying your article. However should remark on few common things, The website style is great, the articles is truly excellent. Excellent job, cheers<br />Model Kebaya Pengantin 2015http://www.modelbajuterbaruku.com/195/contoh-model-baju-kebaya-pengantin-terbaru/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-84853632748109929152007-09-29T11:59:00.000-04:002007-09-29T11:59:00.000-04:00Hmm. I see what you mean. I think it's difficult t...Hmm. I see what you mean. I think it's difficult to know where the line is between showing one's style and looking unprofessional, so it's something I've been trying to figure out. Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-27653675444005880552007-09-29T11:48:00.000-04:002007-09-29T11:48:00.000-04:00Christy,Either. I felt there were references to t...Christy,<BR/>Either. I felt there were references to the humor of the manuscript in this query, but no attempt made to include humor in the query. It made me wonder if the author is truly funny, or just thinks she is. Proof that she can make me laugh is gold.Editorial Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06294247222893767117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-54205956633739650292007-09-28T18:15:00.000-04:002007-09-28T18:15:00.000-04:00Ho hum, twiddly dee twiddly dum...guess my burning...Ho hum, twiddly dee twiddly dum...guess my burning question will forever remain unanswered. I will try to cope....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-27446805008933594282007-09-27T03:11:00.000-04:002007-09-27T03:11:00.000-04:00>>Why, then, was none of the actual humor of the m...>>Why, then, was none of the actual humor of the manuscript included here?<<<BR/><BR/>Do you mean she should have included an excerpt or just continued the humorous tone throughout the letter?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-50064836328986021762007-09-25T15:28:00.000-04:002007-09-25T15:28:00.000-04:00I like this one too! I'm a big fan of pixies with ...I like this one too! I'm a big fan of pixies with a crappy attitude.Welshcakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11345530288844655569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-85738764903200313512007-09-25T15:08:00.000-04:002007-09-25T15:08:00.000-04:00EA, thank you. I was wondering if I had included e...EA, thank you. I was wondering if I had included enough detail about the plot (conflict/resolution stuff, as you mention, too, Marissa)--so it'll be easy to add a sentence or two summarizing a few of the funnier scenes.<BR/><BR/>Hmm... if I <I>can</I> make you laugh, <I>do</I>? Sounds like a challenge...<BR/><BR/>Kate-the-authorAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-34515230347604723872007-09-25T10:48:00.000-04:002007-09-25T10:48:00.000-04:00I liked this one, until I read the word count. I ...I liked this one, until I read the word count. I was hoping for 10,000 words or less with the opportunity for a few black and white illustrations.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-9401579920019381462007-09-25T09:55:00.000-04:002007-09-25T09:55:00.000-04:00I thought this one was pretty good. A lot of cutt...I thought this one was pretty good. A lot of cutting in that final paragraph and a little more on the plot (like, a hint at the further nature of the conflict and its resolution) and some rearranging, and it looks good to go...at least to this non-editor. :)Marissa Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11248406475808085694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-82987012156544290112007-09-25T08:09:00.000-04:002007-09-25T08:09:00.000-04:00I like this too. This is funny and has great image...I like this too. This is funny and has great imagery.<BR/><BR/>A gaggle of baby pixies..Oh ho...!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-50085797951712660452007-09-25T00:49:00.000-04:002007-09-25T00:49:00.000-04:00>>Why, then, was none of the actual humor of the m...>>Why, then, was none of the actual humor of the manuscript included here?<<<BR/><BR/>Do you mean she should have included an excerpt or just continued the humorous tone throughout the letter?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-54364134031106960062007-09-24T23:37:00.000-04:002007-09-24T23:37:00.000-04:00Big Momma,It's a little piece of reassurance. It ...Big Momma,<BR/>It's a little piece of reassurance. It doesn't count for a great deal with me, but it's still worth noting.Editorial Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06294247222893767117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-63843500618313879922007-09-24T21:52:00.000-04:002007-09-24T21:52:00.000-04:00I like this one! And I think there is enough humor...I like this one! And I think there is enough humor in the beginning of the query to hint at humor in the manuscript.Lindsey Leavitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10638744227355752506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7986595816238301046.post-1677528998279258682007-09-24T21:41:00.000-04:002007-09-24T21:41:00.000-04:00Does knowing that she's had work published in seve...Does knowing that she's had work published in several children's magazines help?Miss Awesomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05361901139184911784noreply@blogger.com